Preparing For Descriptive Writing2/15/2018 A quick video clip helps students "relive the moment" and come up with great descriptions. Here are some of our final samples. We dictated our thinking immediately after watching the video.
At Mountsberg we went snowshoeing. The snow was packing snow and sounded like popping bubble wrap and crunching pieces of paper. You can hear the crackling of our snowshoes hitting our boots. We walked on a bridge that sounded like the creaking and crackling of someone walking in flip flops outside. You can hear birds chirping and it sounds like cracking your knuckles. When the train went by, we heard someone shushing you. The bird seeds sound like shaking popcorn kernels. At Mountsberg we went snowshoeing and it sounded like explosions. When we were walking on a hike you could hear the snow crunching like a cap gun. You could hear the sound all around and it kind of sounded like fireworks. It was snowing in little bits of snow. The sound of us running was like an airplane taking off. When we walked up hills, it sounded like a demolition crew. It sounded like a spring stream when we were in the quiet spot of the hike. When we went to Mountsberg the snow sounded like there was an army coming, stomping through the snow. The train sounded like a stampede was coming. When we went to Mountsberg the snow sounded like bones cracking and it sounded like mini gunshots. The snow made me feel ice on my face. At Mountsberg, when we walked, it sounded like guns and airplane engines. When we went through the forest we heard the trees. We heard the wood cracking over the bridge. It was not too cold or too hot. When we were feeding the birds, it felt like someone poking us with fingers. When the train went by, it sounded like a clip when each wheel went onto the next track.
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